https://youtu.be/yD4KwkGbo_M
This time around, in order to meet the minute guideline, I had to cut out some information from my pitch. Because I have been changing things from the first pitch, I haven't memorized it completely as some things I have completely changed or moved around within the pitch to help with flow. Some of the feedback has been in regards to the tone of my pitch; too mono-toned. I feel this has been a challenge considering my topic of choice; mental health. As always, please provide feedback. No feedback is the worst. Thanks!
Vanessa,
ReplyDeleteAgain great job. Like the mission part of the pitch. I feel when people here "our mission" in something like this, they really tune in because they want to know what you are all about. I feel like your last pitch is much better than your first.