Hi Vanessa I am very surprised to see that you felt like you struggled with this assignment. I think you did great! You appeared confident and professional as well as knowledgeable about the issue of mental illness. Normally my advice to improve a speech like this would be to smile more, but with the seriousness of the topic your style is more appropriate. The only comment I would make for you to improve is just to be confident in yourself! You are doing just fine.
Hi Vanessa, You did an awesome job! I can’t believe that you think you struggled with this assignment, I though you nailed it. I understood everything that you were saying very clearly, you used hand gestures, you dressed and acted professionally, and I could tell you are very passionate about the issue of mental illness. You clearly stated your solution to the problem and used facts to back you up through your pitch. Be more confident in yourself, because this pitch is great!!
Hi Vanessa
ReplyDeleteI am very surprised to see that you felt like you struggled with this assignment. I think you did great! You appeared confident and professional as well as knowledgeable about the issue of mental illness. Normally my advice to improve a speech like this would be to smile more, but with the seriousness of the topic your style is more appropriate. The only comment I would make for you to improve is just to be confident in yourself! You are doing just fine.
Hi Vanessa,
ReplyDeleteYou did an awesome job! I can’t believe that you think you struggled with this assignment, I though you nailed it. I understood everything that you were saying very clearly, you used hand gestures, you dressed and acted professionally, and I could tell you are very passionate about the issue of mental illness. You clearly stated your solution to the problem and used facts to back you up through your pitch. Be more confident in yourself, because this pitch is great!!